Please revise this short pargaph its urgent hw?

The world would be a better place if all people know God is with them. People can confirm their lives do not end on Earth, but a new life through belief of Jesus. Furthermore, they would witness the spiritual life where they see angels and the Holy Spirit; people know the purpose of their lives. Until the day all people believe in Jesus Christ, Godly soldiers will continuously hope for this day and endeavor to spread this joy to all.